Darth Fenrir

[Fenrir]

Name:
Kaze Han

Sith Name:
Darth Fenrir

Race:
Human

Side Of The Force:
Dark

Rank:
Sith Acolyte

Class:
Sith Marauders

Age:
25

Weight:
139lb. (Armor, 145lb)

Height:
6'3ft

Build:
His doesn't have a big build, he just above avrage size

Eye color:
Dark Brown

Hair:
Short slik jet black(Seen in pic)

Personality:
Kaze has two kinds. His peaceful side and his Sith side. This is not a split personality, more like two sides that he likes to use. His peaceful side is when his out of his Sith armor that he wears. His some what a kind man that looks on the lighter things in life. Kaze rare gets to be out of his Sith armor so he makes the most of his time out of it. But his Sith side is quit and rarly talks. But there is one thing that links both of them together. And that is both have honor. He is a person that would never fight a unarmed fighter. Jedi or not, that is how he goes by.

Appearance:
With out


With armor


Master:
Haven't found one

Lightsaber:
Twin Light saber. Both being red. They are hidden in both arms that comes out of his palms and into his hands when flicking his wrist.
Hilt:


Lightsaber Form:
Shien/ Djem So

Force Powers:
Inherent Powers: Telekinesis, Force Sense, and Beast Trick
Basic Neutral Powers: Force Push/Pull and Saber Throw
Basic Dark Side Powers: Force throw and Force Lightning/Sith Lightning

History:
He was born on the planet Naboo and dreamed of becoming a Jedi Master one day in his life. But for now, he joined the Naboo forces and was with a sniper. What made him stick out from the rest of the snipers was at he was able to know when and where a target would pop out from. Also he knows where to take cover. This stuck out Kaze greatly and cought the eyes of the Jedi. He was tested by the Jedi and was able to join with them. He was about 18 at the time.
As he trained to be the best Jedi with in his powers, he was able to use duel sabers with easer. This took time for his to train with because he was use to the sniper rifles. But he was able to use them like if they were his own arms. But in his time was the Jedi, he was some what diffrent from the others. One being that he was quit, this came from his sniper training and the fact that he liked to end this fast as he could.
This did make his stick out. On a mission that him and his mission, they were sent to Kaze's home planet Naboo. But To little he knew, a Sith was waiting. With out any warning him and his master was attacked. This was the first time that Kaze faced a Sith and saw how powerful they could be. The endded for Kaze as the Sith was able to slash off both of his arms off. Just below the elbows. But his master was killed in the attacking. Left alive, he was tooken with the Sith to a area.
Kaze was given two things to do. One being that he dies on the spot. Or two, he joined the Sith. Without a thought in his mind, Kaze joined the Sith. Doing so, he was able to get two new arms that housed his new two lightsabers. He was given the name Darth Fenrir to hold. With a new name, Fenrir got himself a armor suit. He is able to freely remove it at anytime. But anytime he is with other Sith, he has his armor on. But he does get out of his armor for freetime of his own.

Strengths:
Because of his pre-training as a sniper, he can act faster and know where to strike without a thought in his mind. but keeps him going is the fact that he is able to keep moving. His armor lefts him move much faster and last longer in the fight, like a power boost. His is able to breath in any type of area, from water fights to places with no air. The biggest this is his speed that mixes with his power. With this mix, he is able to over power some enemies.

Weaknesses:
The down fall of his armor is that it builds up steam. If build up to max, the suit would power down. So Fenrir could only fight with a time limit before it builds up to much steam in the suit. Also because he got his new arms, It's sometimes hard from him to move the way he wants because they can be a few secs slower than what Fenrir wants. So that could leave openings.

[Isus Jarode]

Eh... to be perfectly honest man, this entire bio doesn't seem very fitting of a Sith.

For one, you need to drop the center alignment. That just gets in the way of a proper bio design.

Two, a "split personality" (I know you deem it's not, but such a form of explanation would pose it otherwise) would be seen as a weakness in the True Sith Order. If this supposed Sith claims himself a member of such an Order, then he would not have allowed Kaze Han to continue his training, especially if his personality takes on an "honorable" design. Your character can act kind to others, but that cannot be his true intentions. A true Sith would never allow themselves to merely act kind and light-minded merely because that is how they are. A Sith seeks power, and manipulation is the common tool of such a gain. If you want your character to be courteous and kind in real life, it has to be a ploy, a false face of his, so that he can trick his residents into trusting him.

And in reference to this 'honor' thing, I recommend just dropping it. No Sith has 'honor'; that's a weakness, and if Haze's Master discovered he thought in that fashion, Haze would be dead. In the ways of the Sith, 'honor' is a Jedi weakness, and it holds a Force wielder back from their true power. No mercy... that is, unless it aids you in a fashion of slavery, subtlety, or influence.

Also, you need to include the Dual Saber style of Jar'kai in your Lightsaber styles. If you're going to use dual sabers, it needs to be there.

Also, I expect a much longer and more precise history from you, considering we're getting far too many people hoping to become Jedi or Sith. I'm stepping up the expectations here, and if you want to be a Sith, you're going to need to show me you're ready to RP that Sith. I'd like to see an extensive six or seven paragraph history describing Haze's life, how he was trained in the Jedi Order, and how he gained so many Sith powers in such a short time.

I think this could use a lot more work, not in flaws, but just in the facts of detail. If you wish to become a Sith, you need to prove to me that you wish to become that Sith. Make him a truly in-depth character. That's all I ask.

Once you've done well with that, you'll become a member of the New Sith Empire.